The most interesting place ever is Universal Studios. One is reason I like it is because they have cool motion rides and rollercoasters . 2ND Reason is because they have great breakfast and food. 3RD Reason is because they have awesome amusement parks like Universal Studios and Islands of adventures. One time It was spring break on 2010 and Mom and My Dad said we are going to universal studios for spring break. Then I went to universal studios and then we got a hotel room and then we went to the hotel room and unpacked our stuff and then we went to the pool area with a waterslide and we swimmed for a little bit then we went to sleep. Second Paragraph: Ok it was the next Day at Universal studios and then we woke up and then we ate some breakfast and then we went on the boat to get to the amusement parks and then we finally Me and My family and my sister went to the amusement parks and Me and My sister went on our first rollercoaster we ever rode on when My family and me were at my first rollercoaster and my dad went on with us and then after that woody woodpecker ride me and my dad went on the simpsons ride and my dad kept his eyes closed most of the time and I was screaming cause I was having so much fun on the simpsons ride. 3rd Day/Third Paragraph: Then it was our third day there and then we went to islands of adventures and we went on the cat in the hat ride and it was spinning while it was telling the story and my dad and my sister went on it and then me and my sister and my dad were laughing cause we were having so much fun. Mom didn't ride that much coasters expect for that one trolley train one at the islands of adventures Dr.seuss park. Last Day/Fourth Paragraph:I went for a hour at Universal Studios Theme park and then We went for a another hour at the islands of adventures then I rode on a rollercoaster which is my favorite there and it is dueling dragons and it wasn't scary at all and then I played arcades and then we slept and then woke up then we had to leave cause our spring break was over.
Wednesday, August 31, 2011
Big Writing - draft one
The most interesting place ever is Universal Studios. One is reason I like it is because they have cool motion rides and rollercoasters . 2ND Reason is because they have great breakfast and food. 3RD Reason is because they have awesome amusement parks like Universal Studios and Islands of adventures. One time It was spring break on 2010 and Mom and My Dad said we are going to universal studios for spring break. Then I went to universal studios and then we got a hotel room and then we went to the hotel room and unpacked our stuff and then we went to the pool area with a waterslide and we swimmed for a little bit then we went to sleep. Second Paragraph: Ok it was the next Day at Universal studios and then we woke up and then we ate some breakfast and then we went on the boat to get to the amusement parks and then we finally Me and My family and my sister went to the amusement parks and Me and My sister went on our first rollercoaster we ever rode on when My family and me were at my first rollercoaster and my dad went on with us and then after that woody woodpecker ride me and my dad went on the simpsons ride and my dad kept his eyes closed most of the time and I was screaming cause I was having so much fun on the simpsons ride. 3rd Day/Third Paragraph: Then it was our third day there and then we went to islands of adventures and we went on the cat in the hat ride and it was spinning while it was telling the story and my dad and my sister went on it and then me and my sister and my dad were laughing cause we were having so much fun. Mom didn't ride that much coasters expect for that one trolley train one at the islands of adventures Dr.seuss park. Last Day/Fourth Paragraph:I went for a hour at Universal Studios Theme park and then We went for a another hour at the islands of adventures then I rode on a rollercoaster which is my favorite there and it is dueling dragons and it wasn't scary at all and then I played arcades and then we slept and then woke up then we had to leave cause our spring break was over.
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