Draft #2

        I do not think that cold weather is good. One reason is it makes me sick. Another reason is my nose and my face get too cold. Finally, I don't like cold weather because I'm not used to it.
 

     I got sick from running when it was freezing outside. I had to stay in bed for probably almost a week and I had to miss 4 days of school and I also had to stay in bed all day. I sneezed and I kept coughing.

     When my face and nose get cold I won't feel as great. My face and nose also turn red when my face and my nose get cold.

     I'm not used to cold because I like hot better.

11/30/11

     I'm writing about if I like cold weather or dislike cold weather. Cold weather is the opposite of hot. I don't like cold cause it makes me sick sometimes.

     When I run when its cold outside my nose feels weird and my face gets cold. It makes me feel uncomfortable. I'm more used being hot than being cold.

     In Florida, It's not as cold since it doesn't snow and I live in Florida. I know snow is fun to play with but I don't like that its cold. When its about like 48 degrees its pretty cold for me. 

     When its winter I don't like it cold. When its summer I kinda want it to be cold.

Draft #2

Thanksgiving is coming up which I’m excited about. One reason is that I’m going to spend some time with my family. I also get no school and then I could relax and sleep late.
   I can’t wait until I get to spend some time with my family. When I spend time with my family on thanksgiving I might go eat out to some restaurants or stay at home and eat some stuff. I also might go do some fun stuff like shopping or other things that I might want to do with my family. I’ve done lots of fun stuff on thanksgiving but I don’t need to just do fun stuff everyday when schools out for thanksgiving. The more of no school the more time I could spend time with my family.
    I also get to relax on thanksgiving break. I like to sleep late since there’s no school because when I wake up to school I’m kinda tired. I’m also going to play my PC and PS3 when I have time but I’m not just going to play my PC and PS3 all day. I will play minecraft on my PC with my friends from school. I will watch TV some. I might go and play outside when its a great sunny day. I can relax when there is no school.

Draft #1

Thanksgiving is coming up which I’m excited about. Now 1 reason I’m excited about thanksgiving is that I’m staying at Florida where I live. Also, I’m going to spend some time with my family. I also get no school and then I could relax and sleep late.
   I can’t wait until I get to spend some time with my family. When I spend time with my family on thanksgiving I might go eat out to some restaurants or stay at home and eat some stuff. I also might go do some fun stuff like shopping or other things that I might want to do with my family. I’ve done lots of fun stuff on thanksgiving but I don’t need to just do fun stuff everyday when schools out for thanksgiving. The more of no school the more time I could spend time with my family.
    I also can’t to relax on thanksgiving break. I like to sleep late since there’s no school because when I wake up to school I’m kinda tired. I’m also going to play my PC and PS3 when I have time but I’m not just going to play my PC and PS3 all day. I will play minecraft on my PC with my friends from school. I will watch TV some. I might go and play outside when its a great sunny day. The more of no school I can relax.

Draft #2

     I'm very thankful for having parents. Parents protect me from being hurt, being kidnapped, and from doing bad stuff. My Parents teach me stuff to not do like being bad and how to be good. If I didn't have parents I'd be sad. Also my parents gave me birth so I'm thankful for having parents. My parents take care of me very good and they also give me some very good things I need or want. My parents take me to school or where ever I need to go or want to go. They only give me rewards if I'm good and then my parents teach me well. My parents help me a lot. They are very kind to me.

     I'm also thankful for the PS3 my parents got me at the store. PS3 is fun for online gaming and just regular gaming. PS3 has very fun stuff to do on it like look at pictures,go on the web, and earning trophies for gaming.

     I'm also thankful for the computer that my parents got me at the store. I like to play on my computer because there is fun games on there and then online gaming on my computer also. My computer is good for school and its a good tool to find information. On my computer I can download good programs, look at pictures, look at videos, go on the web, and get mods on my games.

     That's why I'm very thankful for parents,PS3, and computers.

Draft #1

I'm very thankful for having parents. Parents protect me from being hurt, being kidnapped, and from doing bad stuff. My Parents teach me stuff to not do like being bad and how to be good. If I didn't have parents I'd be sad.

     My parents gave me birth so I'm thankful for having parents. My parents take care of me very good and they also give me some very good things I need or want. My parents take me to school or where ever I need to go or want to go. They only give me rewards if I'm good and then my parents teach me well.

     My parents help me a lot. They are very kind to me.