Wednesday, September 28, 2011
Draft #2
Dear Liutenanet Commander Brasfield, 9/28/11
Thank you for teaching us about diving school and navy school. I enjoyed a lot coming to the field trip to learn about this. I was suprised that you had a 40 ft deep pool. It is so much fun there and intersting to go there. I learned about the big balls that it doesn't run like as quick as a snap it takes a couple days to be running. Also thank you for giving me some stuff.
From Harrison
Draft #1
Dear Samuel Brasfield,
Thank you for teaching us about diving school and navy school. I enjoyed a lot coming to the field trip to learn about this. I was suprised that you had a 40 ft deep pool. It is so much fun there and intersting to go there.
From Harrison
Thank you for teaching us about diving school and navy school. I enjoyed a lot coming to the field trip to learn about this. I was suprised that you had a 40 ft deep pool. It is so much fun there and intersting to go there.
From Harrison
Wednesday, September 21, 2011
Draft #2 9/21/11
I think the ultimate living thing is the human because there is a human that is a 115 years old. 115 years old is a long time that makes me think that Humans are the ultimate living thing. Humans can be strong and powerful.
(Paragraph 2): All Humans are the same no comparing but they all don't look the same and there are humans that are good at sports and fighting. Not all humans will live until a 115 or older. You are a human. Everyone you know is a human.
(Paragraph 3): Humans only live long if you treat yourself healthy like drinking water and eating the right food for your body. Don't eat too much junk or you won't be that healthy. Don't be tired of living because living is fun. Humans are not weak or powerful most of them are strong and powerful. Don't just try to force your brain to make you strong.
(Paragraph 4): Make sure that you get exercise and that's how will make you live longer and it will also make you healthy. Just don't just be a couch potato that will make you unhealthy.
(Paragraph 2): All Humans are the same no comparing but they all don't look the same and there are humans that are good at sports and fighting. Not all humans will live until a 115 or older. You are a human. Everyone you know is a human.
(Paragraph 3): Humans only live long if you treat yourself healthy like drinking water and eating the right food for your body. Don't eat too much junk or you won't be that healthy. Don't be tired of living because living is fun. Humans are not weak or powerful most of them are strong and powerful. Don't just try to force your brain to make you strong.
(Paragraph 4): Make sure that you get exercise and that's how will make you live longer and it will also make you healthy. Just don't just be a couch potato that will make you unhealthy.
Draft #1
I think the ultimate living thing is the Human cause there is a human that is a 115 years old. 115 years old is a long time that makes me think that Humans and the ultimate living thing. Humans can be strong and powerful.
(Paragraph 2): All Humans are the same no comparing but they all don't look the same and there is Humans that are good at sports and fighting. Not all humans will live until a 115 or older. You are a human. Everyone you know is a human.
(Paragraph 3): Humans only live long if you treat yourself healthy like drinking water and eating the right food for your body. Don't eat too much junk or you won't be that healthy. Don't be tired of living there's all the fun out there. Humans are not weak or powerful most of them are strong and powerful. Don't just try to force your brain to make you strong.
(Paragraph 4): Make sure you get exercise that will make you live longer and it will also make you healthy. Just don't just be a couch potato that will make you unhealthy.
(Paragraph 2): All Humans are the same no comparing but they all don't look the same and there is Humans that are good at sports and fighting. Not all humans will live until a 115 or older. You are a human. Everyone you know is a human.
(Paragraph 3): Humans only live long if you treat yourself healthy like drinking water and eating the right food for your body. Don't eat too much junk or you won't be that healthy. Don't be tired of living there's all the fun out there. Humans are not weak or powerful most of them are strong and powerful. Don't just try to force your brain to make you strong.
(Paragraph 4): Make sure you get exercise that will make you live longer and it will also make you healthy. Just don't just be a couch potato that will make you unhealthy.
Wednesday, September 14, 2011
Draft #2
The Teleporter
The Teleporter is the thing that can get you places quicker. They get you there as quick as a snap from a finger. There is a GPS installed inside of the time machine and it can also travel time for you. One day there was a time that I woke up late and instead of driving you use the teleporter. The teleporter is the fastest thing that can get you to the place quicker and as fast as it can and it will never slow down.
So guess what everyone you can just buy a teleporter that is a $999.99 value and just for $499.99 and it includes a flying tool for a $1.00.
Teleporter can't just only like travel through the earth, it can travel the whole universe. It can also use a black hole for some magic. It's everywhere if you want to move it you will need 4-6 people to carry it cause it is about 100 pounds.
It also works for shipping things quicker but they have to have a teleporter too cause if not you have to ship the slower way which is a airplane. They would love the teleporter cause of the quicker way to work so they won't be late and they won't ever be fired because of being late. Well here's a picture of what the teleporter can be like.
Draft #1
The Teleporter
Paragraph One-
(MI) The Teleporter is the thing that can get you places quicker. They get you there as quick as a snap from a finger (P). There is a GPS installed inside of the time machine and it can also travel time for you (P). One day there was a time that I woke up late and instead of driving you use the teleporter. The teleporter is unbreakable and you will never have to get a new one.
Second Paragraph: So guess what everyone you can just buy a teleporter that is a $999.99 value and just for $499.99 and it includes a flying tool for a $1.00.
Third Paragraph: Teleporter can't just only like travel through the earth, it can travel the whole universe. It can also use a black hole for some magic. It's everywhere if you want to move it you will need 4-6 people to carry it cause it is about 100 pounds.
Paragraph One-
(MI) The Teleporter is the thing that can get you places quicker. They get you there as quick as a snap from a finger (P). There is a GPS installed inside of the time machine and it can also travel time for you (P). One day there was a time that I woke up late and instead of driving you use the teleporter. The teleporter is unbreakable and you will never have to get a new one.
Second Paragraph: So guess what everyone you can just buy a teleporter that is a $999.99 value and just for $499.99 and it includes a flying tool for a $1.00.
Third Paragraph: Teleporter can't just only like travel through the earth, it can travel the whole universe. It can also use a black hole for some magic. It's everywhere if you want to move it you will need 4-6 people to carry it cause it is about 100 pounds.
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