Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Draft #2 9/21/11



     I think the ultimate living thing is the human because there is a human that is a 115 years old. 115 years old is a long time that makes me think that Humans are the ultimate living thing. Humans can be strong and powerful.

     (Paragraph 2): All Humans are the same no comparing but they all don't look the same and there are humans that are good at sports and fighting. Not all humans will live until a 115 or older. You are a human. Everyone you know is a human.

     (Paragraph 3): Humans only live long if you treat yourself healthy like drinking water and eating the right food for your body. Don't eat too much junk or you won't be that healthy. Don't be tired of living because living is fun. Humans are not weak or powerful most of them are strong and powerful. Don't just try to force your brain to make you strong.

     (Paragraph 4): Make sure that you get exercise and that's how will make you live longer and it will also make you healthy. Just don't just be a couch potato that will make you unhealthy.

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