Main idea: Computers have changed the way the world works.
Proof (1): Social Networking is on the computer and people like it more than talking to people in person.
Proof (2): There is games on the computer that alot of people like instead of playing board games.
Illustration (has a time word): One time I saw a game that I really liked on the computer so now I can see how much the world has changed by computers.
Conclusion (say your main idea again in a different and more interesting way) : Computers have changed alot of how the way the world works.
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