4/16/12 Big Writing

     One time, there was a minecraft person named Steve15532. Steve15532 was a good guy that was nice and when he went to a minecraft food store a guy who was a big thief that is named Griefer10033 that burnt down Steve15532's house and Griefer10033 stole Steve15532's items in his chest. Griefer10033 ran as fast as he can before Steve15532 drove home.

     Steve15532 is back now at his house and now he is super mad that someone burnt down and stole items from his house. Steve15532 is now wondering who did it. Steve15532 is now knocking all of his neighbors doors and he asked "Who burnt down my house?" One neighbor said it was a guy that had the name Griefer.

     The minecraft national news is on and it showed the whole thing what Griefer10033 did to Steve15532's house. Steve15532 called the police and asked about what happened to his house. The police came to Steve15532's house.

     The police is now investigating the crime scene of the mystery of the big grief. The police said that it was Griefer10033 and he also said that there was a voice recorder saying "Hi I'm Griefer10033 and I burnt down the house."

     Griefer10033 had to go to the Minecraft Courthouse. Police said "Steve15532 told me that someone burnt down his house and also stole the items in a large chest and there was a voice recorder saying that it was Griefer10033. The police said "Answer the following questions!' The police turned on the lie detector.

     The police asked "Did you burn down Steve15532's house?" Griefer10033 said Yes. Did you steal stuff from his chest? Police asked. Griefer10033 said Yes! The police asked "Did you leave a voice recorder at his house?" Griefer10033 said YES! It's all true! Griefer10033 cried out.

     The Judge made two options for Griefer10033's consequence. The choices are Minecraft Jail for 1 year or go to boot camp for a year. Griefer10033 only had like 20 seconds to pick the choice or the judge had to pick for him. Griefer10033 said that just take me to jail! Steve15532 got his money back from the house he bought so he moved in to a new house.

                                                         The End

   

Draft #2 4/9/12

    I want to go to the Washington DC trip for 3 reasons. First reason is that I want to meet the president. The Second reason is that I want to see what Washington DC looks like. The third reason is that I want to see the museum of history.

     I want to meet the president of the United States of America because I want to know the president and know each other. I want to meet the president of the United States of America because I want to ask him how he likes being president and how it is. One time, some of my friends and family members have met the president of USA. As you can tell that is why I want to meet the president of USA.

     I want to see what Washington DC looks like because I have never been to Washington DC and for me it is interesting to go to places I have never seen before. I want to see that Washington DC looks like because I want to tell my friends and my family how good it looks. I see people go to Washington DC and some people live in Washington DC. As you can tell that is why I want to see Washington DC.

     I want to see the museum of history at Washington DC because I have seen images of it from the internet and it looks every interesting to me about history about the B.C and before 2000. I want to see the museum of history because there is interesting things like a statue of a dinosaur and the bones of the dinosaur and also facts about some animals. Some people go to the museum of history a lot. As you can tell that is why I want to go to the museum of history.

4/9/12 Draft #1

     I want to go to the Washington DC trip for 3 reasons. First reason is that I want to meet the president. The Second reason is that I want to see what Washington DC looks like. The third reason is that I want to see the museum of history.

     I want to meet the president of the United States of America because I want to know the president and know each other. I want to meet the president of the United States of America because I want to ask him how he likes being president and how it is. One time, some of my friends and family members have met the president of USA. That is the first reason of why I want to go to Washington DC.

     I want to see what Washington DC looks like because I have never been to Washington DC and for me it is interesting to go to places I have never seen before. I want to see that Washington DC looks like because I want to tell my friends and my family how good it looks. I see people go to Washington DC and some people live in Washington DC. That is the second reason why I want to go to Washington DC.

     I want to see the museum of history at Washington DC because I have seen images of it from the internet and it looks every interesting to me about history about the B.C and before 2000. I want to see the museum of history because I heard it was really fun to go even though it is peoples opinions. That is the third reason why I want to go to Washington DC. 

Draft #2 4/2/12

     Laws are important. The first reason why laws are important is because to protect the world. The second reason is that laws keep you from doing something bad. The third reason is that laws are rules by the government and president.

     Laws protect the world because if laws weren't made then the world would be chaos. That's why if you break a law you get a consequence. One time I saw someone giving a TV for free and the person got fired before it would go chaos. Now that was a first reason why laws are important.

     Laws keep you from doing bad things like robbing a bank and lock picking doors. You could go to jail cause it was a law that you can't break. One time I saw a man rob a bank and he went to jail for doing that. Now that was a second reason why laws are important.

     Laws are made by the government and the president. Issac Newton was the one who invented laws. Laws are rules and a law from the government or the president could make a new law like right now. One time the president of the United States of America made a law that you have to use the light bulbs the president choose. Now that is a third reason why laws are important.

Big writing #1 4/2/12

     Laws are important. The first reason why laws are important is because to protect the world. The second reason is that laws keep you from doing something bad. The third reason is that laws are rules by the government and president.

     Laws protect the world because if laws weren't made then the world would be chaos and that's why if you break a law you get a consequence.

     Laws keep you from doing bad things like robbing a bank and lock picking doors and you could go to jail cause it was a law that you can't break.

     Laws are made by the government and the president. Issac Newton was the one who invented laws. Laws are rules and a law from the government or the president could make a new law like right now.