Draft #2 3/1/12

My favorite hobby is video games.

     I like video games cause they're fun and I have interest in video games. There are video games on a computer and a Playstation 3 that I like. There are video games like Minecraft and Driver: San Francisco.

     Some video games are not on the Playstation 3 and some video games are not on the computer. Minecraft is not on the Playstation 3. inFAMOUS is not on the computer.

Draft #1 2/27/12

My favorite hobby is video games.

I like video games cause they're fun and I have interest in video games. There are video games on a computer and a Playstation 3 that I like. There are video games like Minecraft and Driver: San Francisco.

Some video games are not on the Playstation 3 and some video games are not on the computer. Minecraft is not on the Playstation 3. inFAMOUS is not on the computer.

India Writing

     Wildlife animals at India are monkeys,pythons,tigers,cobras,and leopard geckos. There are animals that are at India that are also in the United States of America. Like tigers,monkeys,and leopard geckos.

     Food at India are deserts like ice on a stick. India has spices used as food to. India food is also at the United States of America. That type of food is made in India.  Ice on a stick could be a desert in the United States of America also.


     India is a country and its not close to the United States of America. It is kinda far away from the United States of America. Now here is a picture of India and where its located. It is near China.

     




 

Draft #2

     India is an interesting place to visit. One reason is because to learn about what people do there. Another reason to visit would be to see the amazing sites. Finally, it would be neat to visit because it would be neat to see what the houses look like.

    I would like to learn what people do there because they might do stuff at India that people don't do in the United States of America. I don't know what people do at India so I have to learn about.

    It would also be neat to see some amazing sites because at India people build places that look different and they don't have any related like any of those buildings at the United States of America.

    While I am there, I would definitely want to see the houses because people build houses that I've never seen before or seen any related to the houses at India.

  Now every reason has a thing different about India and the United States.

How India is a interesting to visit?

     India is a interesting place to visit because I haven't been to India yet and I want to learn about India. India is a country. India is kinda poor. India is different than the United States and I'm different than some people who live in India.
   
     India is a great place to visit but they have a different language than you. Language at India is Italian. India is not a scary place to visit just because its different.

     India will take a long time to get there by car but by airplane its quicker. India is not a close country to the United States of America.

Draft #2 3 bridges

                                     Millau Bridge 

     The Millau Bridge is amazing. It is super tall. It is high and the train track is miles below it. It's near the clouds since you can see it like right next to you. I bet it will stay there forever. As you can see it is good.

           

Tower Bridge

 The Tower Bridge is amazing. When you drive into that big hole it will feel like your inside a tower. The twin towers have a bridge connected to each tower. It will stay there forever. As you can see it is good.

                                                              Oliveira Bridge

The Oliveira Bridge is awesome. This bridge has so much connectors and it has a big X. It will glow at night. It will stay there forever. As you can see it is huge.

     Bridges are cool. Oliveria has a big X. The tower  bridge has the twin towers. The Milliau Bridge is high in the sky. I hope you enjoyed learning.

3 Bridges

                                     Millau Bridge 

The Millau Bridge is amazing. It is super tall. It is high and the train track is miles below it. It's near the clouds since you can see it like right next to you.

           

Tower Bridge

 The Tower Bridge is amazing. When you drive into that big hole it will feel like your inside a tower and the twin towers have a bridge connected to each tower.

                                                              Oliveira Bridge

The Oliveira Bridge has so much connectors and it has a big X. It will glow at night.