Draft #2

     I'm very thankful for having parents. Parents protect me from being hurt, being kidnapped, and from doing bad stuff. My Parents teach me stuff to not do like being bad and how to be good. If I didn't have parents I'd be sad. Also my parents gave me birth so I'm thankful for having parents. My parents take care of me very good and they also give me some very good things I need or want. My parents take me to school or where ever I need to go or want to go. They only give me rewards if I'm good and then my parents teach me well. My parents help me a lot. They are very kind to me.

     I'm also thankful for the PS3 my parents got me at the store. PS3 is fun for online gaming and just regular gaming. PS3 has very fun stuff to do on it like look at pictures,go on the web, and earning trophies for gaming.

     I'm also thankful for the computer that my parents got me at the store. I like to play on my computer because there is fun games on there and then online gaming on my computer also. My computer is good for school and its a good tool to find information. On my computer I can download good programs, look at pictures, look at videos, go on the web, and get mods on my games.

     That's why I'm very thankful for parents,PS3, and computers.