Draft #2

        I do not think that cold weather is good. One reason is it makes me sick. Another reason is my nose and my face get too cold. Finally, I don't like cold weather because I'm not used to it.
 

     I got sick from running when it was freezing outside. I had to stay in bed for probably almost a week and I had to miss 4 days of school and I also had to stay in bed all day. I sneezed and I kept coughing.

     When my face and nose get cold I won't feel as great. My face and nose also turn red when my face and my nose get cold.

     I'm not used to cold because I like hot better.